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18 July 2008 @ 01:44 pm
We can hardly believe it ourselves, but yes, it's finally here. The long awaited next part of Wonder Of My World. It halso happens to be the last chapter of this little story of ours. Once again, we apologize for the awful delay, and we hope that you will enjoy. :)

Title: Wonder Of My World (12/12)
Authors: ilovemybaby & fallonblackdays
Characters/Pairings: Jared/Jensen, Steve Carlson, Christian Kane
Disclaimers: We don't own these people, they own themselves. None of this ever happened and, alas, the couple is not real. None of this was meant as an offence to anyone. We're just pretending, folks.
Notes: (1) Story and chapters titles and quotes all coming from various Steve Carlson's songs.
(2) Huge thanks to wake_up_older29 for the amazing beta job! *hugs*
Summary: Something's wrong with Jensen, and he makes a point not to tell Jared what is it. But when Jared finds out anyway, his reaction surprises even Jared himself.

Chapter 1 – Tell You A Tale | Chapter 2 – On The Road | Chapter 3 – Kinda Crazy These Days | Chapter 4 – I Could Never Say… | Chapter 5 – Losing My Mind | Chapter 6 - What You’re Running From | Chapter 7 – Moving Along | Chapter 8 - Between A Lover And A Friend | Chapter 9 - I Asked For Help From Above | Chapter 10 - Walk Away | Chapter 11 - All This Rain Has Got Me Down

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(no subject) - fallonblackdays on July 23rd, 2008 02:25 pm (UTC) (Expand)
kezzie5kezzie5 on July 23rd, 2008 07:06 am (UTC)
Oh I loved this and I can't wait for the sequel. I wish I could leave you a more in depth review but I'm having to be quick tonight.

The moment of Jensen faking a nightmare had my heart ache though. These boys will do absolutely anything to protect each other even for the smallest of moments. The relationship between the 4 of them have me want to read about it forever, I feel you capture it so well. I care about these guys in your fics as if they were my closest friends.
Soniafallonblackdays on July 23rd, 2008 02:26 pm (UTC)
Oh, wow. I'm kinda speechless here. You don't know how much happy it makes me to know that you've grown so fond of our characterization. Thank you so much. *hugs*
chrissy6299: J2Lovechrissy6299 on July 23rd, 2008 02:38 pm (UTC)
Great story, I'm glad that it finally has an ending. And I'm glad that there will be a sequel, because Steve and Chris need to work things out too.
Soniafallonblackdays on August 6th, 2008 08:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you, I'm really glad that you liked it! :D
dimturien: J2: jsquaredwhdimturien on August 4th, 2008 08:09 pm (UTC)
So much love! ♥

*sits down and waits patiently for the sequel*
Soniafallonblackdays on August 6th, 2008 08:45 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much!! ♥ *hugs*
fanofsuperfanofsuper on August 24th, 2008 08:34 pm (UTC)
Great ending to a great story. I'm glad that Chris knows how Steve felt about him & hope that in the sequel they can become as close as Jared & Jensen are on their way to be.

Jared was a little slow in getting back to Jensen about the decision he had made but I am glad that he made the right one.

Just 1 thing I noticed & not trying to offend:

Man needs his pace, Chris.” should be peace

Looking forward to the sequel whenever you can post it. It's worth the wait.
Soniafallonblackdays on August 24th, 2008 08:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much! I'm really happy that you liked this final chapter. :)

ust 1 thing I noticed & not trying to offend:

Oops. It was supposed to be "space". *fixes it* And of course you're not offending! Thanks for pointing it out, I miss typos sometimes, no matter how much I re-read stuff. ;)

I really can't give you a date to look forward to for the posting of the sequel. But we'll try to find the time for it ASAP.
(no subject) - fanofsuper on September 1st, 2008 01:39 am (UTC) (Expand)
     Mandy: Bring Some Piea_phoenixdragon on October 5th, 2008 09:09 am (UTC)
Fantastic dear!! I enjoyed every second!! Just one question: Did Chris and Steve get together?

*smishes you*

Beautiful job, honey!
Soniafallonblackdays on October 5th, 2008 01:22 pm (UTC)
Hey there! I'm so happy you enjoyed! Thanks for your feedback. :) As for your question...Stay tuned for the sequel and find out. ;) (it'll be very slow in coming because RL is crazy atm, but it will come *grins*)
locifanlocifan on December 11th, 2008 06:06 am (UTC)
Thanks so much for all the time and effort you put into this...it's very much appreciated.
Soniafallonblackdays on December 16th, 2008 06:52 am (UTC)
Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm real happy you enjoyed. :)
bigj52bigj52 on January 29th, 2009 01:39 am (UTC)
I'm so devastated that this is ending but happy that there's a sequel. Wonderful story, I couldn't get enough of it. I've read it in about 3 days in every spare moment I had. I was worried that Jared wouldn't come back. And great stuff with Steve and Chris but we need closure and lots of hot sex for both couples so pretty please put us out of our misery and give us a sequel sooooooon. Thanks.
Soniafallonblackdays on January 29th, 2009 05:55 am (UTC)
There is a sequel but RL just ain't agreeing with it at the moment. I'm afraid you'll have to wait. :( I'm real happy that you liked this story though! Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
strgazr04strgazr04 on May 3rd, 2010 08:15 am (UTC)
hey just curious if you've posted the sequel to this and i missed it. i actually just read this whole thing in one sitting lol. very nice work
Soniafallonblackdays on May 4th, 2010 05:42 pm (UTC)
Hi there,
The sequel is written, I just need to find the time to edit it, and then it will be ready for betaing and finally posting. Long process, I know. :( I hope I can let you guys have it in a couple of months, tops? *kicks hectic RL*
I'm really glad you like this story! For future reference, all my writings (and co-writings) will now be posted at my own writing journal, e_rated You will not find new stories of mine posted on here. :)
anntarot: Carlsonanntarot on September 12th, 2010 04:41 am (UTC)
I've put a link to chapter one of this fic at my journal and I've come back here to re read this I think four times now. I can't remember if I left comments before but I do love this fic. It was my first brush with Steve Carlson and now two years later I love his music a lot.

SO thank you for writing such a great fic and introducing me to Steve.
Soniafallonblackdays on September 12th, 2010 11:50 pm (UTC)
Oh wow! Thank you so much! I'm so happy our story could get you introduced to Steve! I adore his music. :) Thanks so much for reading!
emptyspaces11emptyspaces11 on November 3rd, 2010 05:38 am (UTC)
I really loved this story you wrote. Too much anst. I loved! I can tell you I was so... afraid that the end was another...
Thank you for shared!
May I add you as a friend? So I can have the alerts of the posts. Want me as your friend? Visit my livejournal.

Soniafallonblackdays on November 3rd, 2010 06:24 am (UTC)
Re: Hi!
Hi there! Thank you for your feedback, I'm really glad you enjoyed the story. :) However, my writings are not on this journal anymore. You can find them all over at my writing journal, e_rated You might want to add that to your friend list because I hardly ever update my personal journal anymore.

Thanks again! :)
emptyspaces11emptyspaces11 on November 3rd, 2010 05:40 am (UTC)
Mad girl here...
I add you as my friend... But I am still inviting you to visit my livejournal...
Sandycub: J2sandycub on November 9th, 2011 04:16 pm (UTC)
This was such a great story to read! Not even sure how I found it... I really enjoyed Jared's inner voice getting all whiny and nasaly! Laughed my butt off through that.

Also loved the Steve and Christian part! Off to try to find the sequel!
Soniafallonblackdays on April 14th, 2012 11:09 am (UTC)
I am so incredibly late...seriously, it's not even definable how late I am. I'm sorry!! Thing is I don't write in this community anymore, so I sometimes miss notifications coming from here. I'm replying to your comment regardless though, because I don't want you to think you were ignored!
I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much! ilovemybaby and I surely enjoyed writing it! Unfortunately we never got around to writing that sequel; life just got in the way and we both got way too busy. In our heads however, Christian and Steve ended up together (if that can make you feel better about the lack of sequel). :)
If you'd like to keep up with my stories, I now have my own writing journal, e_rated Thanks again for reading and commenting, and I'm sorry I was so late!

deezy_y: J2 animated - J2 is love -convdeezy_y on April 14th, 2012 03:41 am (UTC)
Aww...awesome story...you had me alternating between laughing and shaking my head in frustration (but still laughing) throughout the whole story. Loved it to pieces!!!
Soniafallonblackdays on April 14th, 2012 11:10 am (UTC)
haha! Alternating responses are always a good thing! :D Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I'm really glad you liked this story so much! :)
p.s. I don't write in this community anymore. If you'd like to read something else or keep up with my writing, you can check out my writing journal, e_rated
(no subject) - deezy_y on April 14th, 2012 04:11 pm (UTC) (Expand)